The actors clearly needed more time to rehearse so, keep that in mind for the and episode
Overall if your personally happy with it then im happy
Need more angles and shot changes used
There is some background noise which needs sorting out
There is not enough scenes / interesting content within the episode
Save footage as you go along
Check the scenes before leaving the shoot
Make sure that everyone knows what is going on
Make it more comedic
More energy is needed
There needs to be more visual gags in it
The characters need to be more stylized on their actually character base
Organize it much better, (rehearsals are a MUST!)
Nothing technically wrong with script etc but just needs more preparation
Great introduction, but it is a bit all over the place in the middle but good start!
On track, keep the momentum going
Overall well done!
From the feedback given, we are going to all together going to consider the things which were good and bad about our 1st episode, and we will consider possible changes, in order to make sure that the 2nd episode is better than the 1st.
Sunday, 24 January 2010
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